Well, wow! Talk about a sexy chapter! The heat between Lois and Clark is tangible. But they have a generally great relationship, although they do seem to be moving ahead quite fast:
Trouble didn't begin to describe her. Three days, three short days and she was falling so helplessly.
They met only three days ago, and the heat between them is getting ready to erupt! I loved the flying sequence, by the way. There were definitely echoes of Superman the Movie here.
But this was a most enjoyable, feel-good chapter. Like Bellarata, I really liked Lois's friends and the whole easygoing camping spirit. So nice. I guess it can't remain so nice, however, so now I'm wondering where you'll be taking this fic! Surely you aren't going to end it the way the Superman-Lois romance ended in the sequel to Superman the Movie, Superman II?
Ann
P.S. I, too, am sorry about all your RL trouble. I'm glad your husband is okay, and I hope you yourself will get better soon.
