Michael, you wrote Mindy Church perfectly. I could hear her voice in my head as I read.
Uhmm ... Clark is still heading *away* from Lois. Although the preview looks promising!
I enjoyed Clark's disgruntledness with all thing Kryptonian. He just wants to be with Lois! Any chance you can organise that? Please?
Very nice part, Michael
You have so many threads floating around, I'm wondering where you are going to take them. Looking forward to more.
Corrina.
