Hi Michael
Wow - what a beginning! I can see why it is going to take a lot of parts to sort out.
Lois and Clark separated
, but I'm hoping you will find a way to bring them together!
And Mrs Cox - she has to mean trouble.
I loved the bit with Martha's cookies. She was so sure Lois would find it easier with chocolate inside her!
Great start Michael. I hope your muse cooperates and you can post parts regularly, because the first chapter promises a great ride.
Thanks!!!
Corrina.
