I have to say that though I have not commented on every part (because of something called graduate school), I am absolutely smitten by this tale. I love how Lois and Kal-El are learning from each other. It must have taken so much--imagination--to so vividly describe this planet and it's people and be able to give us a view of what you saw.

Great job! You must hurry back with more!

~Sheila

I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.