First, this story is awesome! Almost everything could be worked out, except for the fact that Lucy blurted to the whole newsroom that Lois slept with Clark. To me, that is unforgivable. And the fact that Lucy did this whole thing to make Lois realize her feelings for Clark--then why act out like this? She shoud have been happy that her plan worked. But nooo--I think Lucy really wanted something with Clark, but he is so in love with Lois. Serves Lucy right!
Can you tell that I am not very fond of this Lucy. She started this dangerous game.
Hurry back and finish! Sure you can do it in one more part?
Loved it!
~Sheila
