Great story. I too am mystified on how you are going to tie it up in one part. Unless... it's the beginning of a multipart story. I have trouble thinking of Bruce Wayne as the baddie since I'm a Batman fan too. Dark, yes, evil no.
Looking forward to the next part.
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Artemis

History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis