Hi,
I agree, this seems a tragic beginning, and I'm not sure things are going to get any less harrowing, but that said, your story is written very well.
You made me feel for Clark, and for Lois, though she had been the one to instigate the sad situation.
I think that for the moment I will stay with it too, and hope life does improve for both Lois and Clark.
Yours Jenni
