As you know Jenni, I love this story.
When I read your Lois and Clark, I SEE the Lois and Clark from the series with the expected evolution you have put them through.
I love the spark of Lois and Clark working together.
I find the police interesting. I actually think you would find that in real life it is rare for the police to listen to the newsmakers. I always get the impression there is a line there they don't cross .. whether it is because of pride, or stupidity....
so... I guess... I find the idea of the police only slowly wanting to acknowledge Clark a reflection of the real world.
I worry about where Tom is targeting next... You've alluded to something in one of the parts... so I'm worried....
I hope 'Lane and Kent' can stop him in time.