Have been reading this story from the beginning without commenting (I know, bad girl). But I can no longer remain a silent reader.

I love it. It's intriguing.
And personally, I think Martha and Chris are more like Clark and Lana. Big love, everybody expects them to get married one day...

I hope the next part will contain Jonathan and show that one can love more than once. I hope it will be love growing slowly. I hope it'll be an example to Lois AND Clark of how they can get their marriage to work.

And lastly, I'd like to say that I love this twist on the author's part very much. In the show, Jonathan had to pursue Martha and proposed several times. And Lois, too, needed to be courted for a long time. I'm envisaging that here again we'll find a similar parallel. And of course, I'm holding out for the happy-ever-after of our favourite couple. blush

Sira - *disappearing back into lurkdom*