Sara, I'm enjoying catching up on all the reading I let get away from me in the last 6 weeks, yours included. This is a really good story. I can't wait to see what comes next.
I'm wondering like the comments in part 4 if there is any significance to her having a cold.
You keep mentioning that the chocolates arrive fresh every few days, and I wonder where from? is this significant? Who's making them? Are they truly swiss? Are they what's making her sick?
Keep up the good work!
Desiree