This was another very good chapter. My favorite part was when Lois placed soft kisses on Clark and made him fly. You give Lois and Clark's love a sweet sensuality that I find irresistible.
Like Elisabeth, I enjoyed the portrayal of Martha here. Isn't it great when people can keep their heads and stay calm and do the right thing when they need to? Way to go, Martha!
Also like Elisabeth, I'm eagerly waiting for Clark to put on his suit. I can imagine Lois instructing him to take off his glasses, and I can just picture how incredibly reluctant he will be to do so! But I think she will give him no choice. And then she will slick back his hair, and... watch Lois and Clark as Superman is staring back at them through Clark's eyes!!!!
Also like Elisabeth, I wonder if you'll really be able to wrap everything up in just one more part. Maybe an epilogue is in order here!
Ann
