Wow, thank you, Ann. I've always been looking forward to getting your feedback. There's a reason for your being one of the most famous feedback writers on these boards, really.
And the way you interpreted this story, it sounds so fascinating that I'm afraid I'll spoil your idea by posting the real story. Unfortunately, you're way, way off the truth. I hope you'll like it anyway, because Lois will be a strong character in this fic.
Anyway, your analogy to the book of genesis is interesting - something I didn't actually think of. Maybe you'll come to think of another story in the book of genesis that is rather famous...
