Well, that was interisting. Have you ever listened to the song Closer from Maroon 5? It reminds me of your fiction. If you want to check it out
here is the link .
I’m still in Lois’ side, I know that what she did was wrong, but Clark is no saint either. And he hasn’t even bothered to hear Lois’ explanation, he simply walked away again! Maybe he wants to think, to sort his thoughts out. But Lois is intitled to explain herself, isn’t she?
And besides he was so rude telling her not to jump from a sky scraper, tipically male behaviour. I wanted to make Lois scream "I rather die than have you holding me ever again." But, hey you are the author.
I don’t even know if I want them to end up together, anymore. Sometimes goodbye is the only way. If you want to write a thank ending were they don’t stick together in the end, I would read. Clark can end up with Mayson, and Lois can end up a single mother.
*subtle hint* 
Anyway, you've got me anxious for next part, as always.
