I'm coming in a bit late, but I'm with the others. Great start - I hope you'll write more. Lovely imagery, sweet, and I like the way it starts out focusing on a day that wouldn't really matter to Superman like it matters to some of the rest of us.
'Toc
TicAndToc :o)
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"I have six locks on my door all in a row. When I go out, I lock every other one. I figure no matter how long somebody stands there picking the locks, they are always locking three."
-Elayne Boosler
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