This was very well done. The Jonathon in this world seems so unlike the Jonathon Im used to. He really has his knickers in a knot over lois's 'relationship' with clark.

There was one sentence I found unusual
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Lois felt her bowels turn to water.
Eeek, that sounds kinda disgusting. cat

Anyways, I am looking forward to seeing whether Jonathon's attitude to Lois will or won't change. Is there anyway lois can earn his respect or does he just have to work through his feelings about Lana. Maybe Dennis Lang can help with some of those issues.

Cheers, back to theatre for surgery I go. (hmm, like yoda, I sound)

Em

Lois: Clark, you don't have to be embarrassed. That's what friends are for. Just tell me how much.
Clark: Lois, I want you to go out with me!