Woah! I loved it! Not so sure about Superman reveal but I loved it and I loved the bit about:
a) Having to explain to Henderson about murdering Clark
b) Clark getting the nerve up to ask the question
c) "The opposite of my father" That was a stroke of genius because it explains so much about who Lois is and what she needs and why in one fell swoop. And the fact that that's what all women need regardless of what their past life is like - we all need "someone to trust everything with".
Awesome. Yes I want a sequel but I am wondering if it would be possible to maintain the tension now that she knows he is Superman and that he wants her. But nevertheless sequel please, because I trust in your ability to pull it off. ;-)
The Little Tornado.
The Little Tornado is ....
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Marisa Wikramanayake
Freelance Writer & Editor,
Board Member of SoEWA and Writing WA
http://www.marisa.com.au
