There are too many sweet moments in this to quote them all.
I'm very intrigued by Lois' current locations, even as you tantalize us with all of these wonderful flashbacks.
I like your Wayne Irig. I like Lois' position at the paper; it makes sense. I like how she got him alone to ask all of her questions. I like how she figured out flying for him--too sweet! I like discovering the globe together, particularly since it was her idea to go look at the ship.
I'm still wondering about the title.
Elisabeth
