Yay, they got Luthor. Good going.
I do find that Pagliano is being extremely stupid in allowing Lex to get him away from the house. He must know how much danger he's in. I wonder if you could tighten Pagliano's reasoning up. Otherwise I just see it as a way for the writer to get him out of the house.
Otherwise, I truly enjoyed this section. The bloodthirstyness of the killing was extremely well done.
gerry
