Really enjoying the story, but I do have one nitpick.
“Well, Jonathan and Clark can show you around, Lucy. I think Jonathan said we had a new calf this morning. And Mrs. George, Chelsea, brought over one of their kittens yesterday. She thought you might enjoy playing with it while you were here.”
A new calf is a big deal. Martha would definately know if they had a new one.
“I don’t want lasers any where near my eyes!”
Too funny! And, of course, we know that Clark didn't wear his glasses, because he didn't need them in KC where he didn't need a cover story.
By the way, give a girl a break. I just started reading the story and I'm hopelessly behind. I started reading because I saw that the first post was only about a week old. I figured you had only posted one or two parts--three max. Now I see that you're almost done. I promise to leave feedback on each and every part, but slow down for me. Okay?
Elisabeth
