Another great segment, although I think Lois Luthor should keep her real name since the other Lois is just a visitor.

I like how Clark lures Lois Luthor out. She trusts him as much as any Lois trusts any Clark--my own writing not withstanding.

I didn't like how Bobb didn't realize he was being followed. I know Clark is Superman, but it feels a little sloppy. I feel like yelling, "Come on, Bobby. This is Luthor we're talking about!"

I hope the next part is long, because I can't see how you're going to finish this without two or three more parts.

Elisabeth