I liked this, but I was somewhat disappointed reading it. The detail, the mood, the feeling that it was all really happening. I was settling down for a good, long epic type fic, when it was really a vignette in disguise.
Any chance of making me less disappointed by expanding this? It's a really nice vignette, but I'd love to see it as a longer story.
(Ok, ok, you warned us with the 1/1, but I wasn't paying attention.)
