Thank you all for commenting.
As many of you have pointed out, this is not just an episode rewrite, but an alternate universe story. I hope you enjoy the differences enough to continue to read the story.
I always thought that a strong character like Lois Lane had too many hang ups in this television show, so I am trying a to portray her a little more sure of herself, and not so fooled by men who are idiots.
If anybody has any suggestions on things I haven't addressed in the story, or mistakes I've made, they would be most welcome. I have no buffer on this story, so I'm not sure where the characters are going to end up yet. Maybe they'll tell me as the story goes along. <g>
-- Taivas
