Hi!
This is a great story! I've often thought Clark made a huge mistake when he broke off with Lois. However, the show never really let Clark tell his side or showed how much it hurt him. I really like the marriage couseling type of story you are writing. It is funny, gives some great advice (like communication is key), and has some angst. I also like the interaction amongst the characters you have introduced. Keep up the good writing!
