Eeeep!
Nice racking up of tension in this one, Nan, love the way everything is falling smoothly into place. I enjoyed Sam's musings on whether or not Clark was Superman and seems he's finally grown up some when it comes to women.
Very sweet.
Ellen continues to entertain - you've given us a very sympathetic version of the character while keeping her entirely
in character, which is a delight to read.
So, Clark is on the trail - hurry up, Clark before Ellen gets herself in more trouble! (Although it's becoming clear where Lois gets her traits from, so I won't be at all surprised if Ellen hasn't dealt with the matter herself before Superman gets anywhere near.
) Go, Ellen! <g>
LabRat