Hi!
You still have me crying! The funeral and then afterwards how you have Jimmy, Martha & Clark go down memory lane was perfect. The way you described how they remembered Jonathan was so vivid and acurate. I was very pleased to see Jimmy come to the funeral. Lois will be mad she didn't go to the funeral!!!
The healing is starting but has a long way to go. I really like how you put Jimmy in this story, he will be a good friend for Clark. Martha is right, as mothers usually are, tell Lois you are superman Clark, and soon!!!!!
Looking forward to more!
P.S. I say go for a double major, journalism and math!
