Great chapter--your writing style is getting better, clearer and more detailed, too.

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“Do you blame her? You took away her freedom of choice. For all intents and purposes, you raped her. You abused your powers to take away her right to choose,” Clark said harshly. He was sounding more and more like Jonathan Kent, or at least how Kal-El thought his father would have reacted. “Right now, I would like nothing better than to tan your hide like cheap leather,” Clark added.
What everybody seems to forget is that, at that point in time, Lois was practically BEGGING him to make her forget, even though she didn't know he could. She couldn't bear to look at Clark every day, knowing that he was Superman, and not tell the world that she was in love (or that Clark was Superman, possibly).


"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game

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