Nan, as a rule I'm not really a fan of nextgen or heavily A-plotted stories. And yet you've managed to suck me into this one, just like LabRat. You've done a great job of writing Ellen here, and I can certainly believe that she would be this suspicious of Clark. You had me laughing out loud at the way she was following him around and checking up on him!
But the stalker plot has me fascinated, too. Unlike some of your other readers, I don't tend to notice clues or foreshadowing, so I was only clued in that Ellen might have photographed the stalker when I read this folder. But that doesn't remotely detract from my enjoyment of the story - far from it! I'm securely along for the ride now.
So MORE!!!
Wendy
