Hi!
This is a great part! thumbsup
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“Goodbye, Lois,” I say softly. I walk up behind her and place a kiss, ever so gently, in her hair.
I read this bit and I can't help to get teary-eyed. whinging This is so heart wrenching. I read this and can see this scene in my head.
notworthy
Just two more parts left? I hope in the last two everything will turn out okay.

I'll try to come back for a proper fdk. Sorry it's short.

You're the icing on my cake.
What's that?
Chocolate, of course.
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