Hi!
I just got caught up with your story.
I always love POV type fanfics. When I read them I feel I see everything through the character's eyes. It encourage me to identify with the narrator. I just love it!
EDIT:
I forgot to ask in part 1, why Clark doesnt want to be caught eating a big sandwich except for Lana lecturing him about cholesterol. Doesnt Lana realized that it doesnt affect him? if they are in fact together and engaged, obviously she might have known that about him. I mean she knew if he was lying (given the smudge mayo on his chin). After all this time she should have known Clark still is as buff as always.
You don't have to answer this. Its just one of my thoughts.
