You do like torture us, don't you?
And you do like torture poor Lois and Clark! Well, I can only say: great!
I like angst stories, and this is very, very good!
I loved Lois-Martha growing relatioship, Lois knows Martha is a loving mother like Mama was, and now she probably needs a motherly figure to help her!
About the "Greetings, my son" ans "Greetings, my daugther" lines: obviously Lois and Clark think they are siblings, usually if someone calls you "daugther" is your mother or father, but here this man doesn't say "I'm Jor-El, your father" or something like this! And his words and body language are so "formal"! And are we sure this is Jor-El? You don't say if he has the S on his tunic!
About baby Lois and baby Clark on Krypton,I'm still going with my initial idea, that they were birth-married, but we'll see...
This is a great part Janet!
I'm eagerly wait for the next chapter!
simona
