Wow. Yesterday, I saw you posted part 2 but I didn't have time to read it, so I came back today to read part 2, and I found pat 2, 3 and 4! Wow. That was quick!
I loved your story. Especially the first part, that was pretty sad with Lois' rejection of Clark and everything, and the last part that was very funny, with Lois thinking Clark was suicidal. Well, all the apearances were indeed against him.
Very well done. My only regret: your story is not long enough. I could take more of that. You did great. Keep it that way in your future stories. And congratulations for posting such a good story for your first try.
EDIT: I edit my message because I don't know if I was clear enough the first time around. When I say that my only regret was that your story wasn't long enough, I didn't mean it like a complain, but like a compliment. I wanted to read more from you, and this amazing story. Again, that was GREAT.
