I just got a chance to catch up on this story, and I am very much enjoying it so far.

The exposition that we have seen hints that this will be a dark and pensive story, but in a good way. The quality of your writing is very good, and I have been drawn into the story.

I am looking forward to more sections.

-Em

"But my experience is that as soon as people are old enough to know better, they don't know anything at all."

-Oscar Wilde, "Lady Windermere's Fan"