I'm sorry I hadn't commented on the last two parts, I just catch up. And I still love your story very much.
I was very upset by the death of Dave, but I'm really glad that Lois investigate it with her old manners. That sentence from Henderson say it all:
“I should have known that one day you’d be back in the game.”
That reinforce the fact that Lois had changed in the months she spend with Luthor, and the fact that she is back to herself since she saw Clark again. And I love that.
And the description of Clark's feelings in the first half of the part was so very well done. The guilt and the need to see her again together. That was great.
I would love to be next sunday yet.
