I love how descriptive your writing is here! Really drew me in from the first moment! Excellent work with the tension and urgency!

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"No. I have. I once got a paper cut," he said, still staring at his bloody fingertips.

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I always love the idea of Superman experiencing the new, strange, human feelings! The nausea, the hot tea!

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“You look just as baffled as you did when I told you to put your paper cut in your mouth.”

Hee, I love how she approached the subject!! It was a very sensitive moment, definitely not the time for a flurry of feelings to come out! This was perfect!!

Great story, thank you for sharing!! ❤️❤️

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