Short and good. It took me a moment to figure out what's going on sometimes but that might be intentional. And of course Lois would not pay attention to the fact no one would have opne in the middle of the night, even in MEtropolis. It's about chocolate after all, so who cares? Liked the story.
Guesses...Due to the length (or rather shortness), the DC refference, and the abruptness of some of the scenes (as in we get thrown in the middle of something), I was going to say QueenOfTheCapes. However, after having read the Channuka story, that seems to be a more likely candidate for her...IDK. Who else writes short fics like this? Hrm...I'm gonna say CarrieRene, then.
