Thanks Bek. I'll try to post the next part in a few hours. I think that's actually my favorite chapter.

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
I wrote way, way back at the beginning that this would be a tense ride. It has been, hasn't it? And it's not over. Bakasi has a few surprises left for us.

Thank you again for allowing me to beta this work, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed it!


Yeah, I remember that you wondered how I was planning on keeping up the tension for the entire story after you got Chapter 10 or 12 back to me. To be honest, I was wondering the same while writing this.

Two more chapters and an epilogue to follow party


It's never too dark to be cool. cool