Well, you've got me well and truly addicted to this story! I love the way L&C's relationship is developing. Lois is being a very good friend to Clark, which will hopefully lead to him trusting her to help him figure out how to fix all this. (Because we all know that eventually Lois will figure out how to fix all this!) I like how you're moving through S1 with the a-plots in the background. We don't need all the details; we just need enough timeline markers to let us see the progression through the season. Nicely done.
