I just have to say, Ann, that your feedback blows me away. eek I'm at a bit of a loss for words, really. goofy

But I did want to point this out:

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There is such tenderness here when Lois watches him, but she doesn't seem to notice that tenderness herself.
I LOVE that you picked up on the tenderness! If there was one emotion I was trying to get across in this scene, that was it. Thank you for all you touching observations on this scene. notworthy

And I'll take it as a high compliment that I've got you sympathizing with Pete and Elle. laugh

And, Maria, don't worry *too* much about Elle... wink

Thank you both for the wonderful feedback! smile

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