Annie, your writing is fluid, descriptive and just plain beautiful. The last rom-com I read, (but did not finish) was so far below your talent it is amazing. The author must have paid them to publish it! sick Anywho, your description of Lois in the bullpen waiting for twelve o'clock was hilarious and Cat's reaction to the 'Kansas' comment was absolutely priceless! I howled with laughter!

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They retrieved her luggage, a large suitcase that Clark carried to the parking lot without complaint after asking her whether she was really only planning to stay for the weekend and receiving yet another eye roll.

Yup, that's our Lois!

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She shook her head, laughing, unable to think of a retort, but unwilling to concede. And then his gaze slid to her mouth, and her laughter died in her throat. His eyes flicked back to hers, and she leaned toward him in invitation. He smiled and then his lips were on hers, and her eyes were closed and she was sighing happily into his mouth. He was so gentle, so sweet. His hand slid across her cheek, holding her steady as his lips explored hers.

Purrr.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.