I just caught up with this story and WOW it is SO great! I really love how you've captured everyone's character so perfectly. I really enjoyed the scenes with Martha and Jonathan, wonderfully written!
~Liz
Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
it is SO great! I really love how you've captured everyone's character so perfectly. I really enjoyed the scenes with Martha and Jonathan, wonderfully written! 
