Hi Bakasi, Terry, and Queenie,
Thank you all for your feedback.
Bakasi, to judge by your own writing, I would say that you understand English rules far better than do many native speakers of the language. You are not giving yourself enough credit.
Terry, your praise means a lot to me, especially on anything muse-related. Your muse meta-stories enchanted and enthralled me when I first read them. I had never before come upon anything like them.
Queenie, in a nice little bit of irony, I had to edit the story immediately after I posted it to add the "ue" to the end of "dialog" (sic). I think my years in the IT field of discussing "dialog boxes" has corrupted me. I also think my personal gremlin is trying to get back at me for exposing him
Joy,
Lynn
