Hi Bakasi,
Please make this the first of a two-parter. My mind is going in a horrible direction with this story; specifically, that Lois is so overwrought that she doesn't pay sufficient attention to her driving and has a fatal car accident.
You've given us a very realistic look at what might happen down the line for our favourite couple. If Lois weren't so frazzled, I am sure she would have asked the journalistic questions before flying off the handle, but she is overwhelmed and she is human. It isn't surprising that Mad Dog nee Lane has come out.
Kudos on a well-written and thought-provoking part of what I hope proves to be a longer story.
Joy,
Lynn
