Funny. Really funny. I chuckled audibly.
Best lines (IMHO)?
Tempus stilled.
Clark still hadn’t let go of his hand. “You have really beautiful eyes,” he observed.
“IthinkIdbettergonow. BYE!”
although I might have dropped the period and made it all one panicked blurt. But that's just me. I'm strange and I know it - my wife tells me that quite often.
I could see Tempus' eyes grow wide and his jaw drop. Quite amusing.
Which was your intent, obviously. You nailed it!
