Just read the entire story (so far) so I am now caught up.
I just love how you flesh out the minor characters of the story. Eleanor and the security guard for instance. Sometime you involve them further in the story (Elanor for instance) and sometimes not but either way in improves the depth of the story so much.
I am really enjoying the slightly alternate universe and how the story flows. Right now I can't wait for Chapter 14.
Mike
