Hi Terry, thanks for reading!
Letting something happen to either Lucy or the baby would have been Lex-level cruel.
Honestly it never occurred to me to have anything irrevocably horrible happen to Lucy or her baby (the ladies in Hangouts chat assure me that I have some Lex-level evil in me somewhere, but I can't seem to get it onto the page)
I really enjoyed writing Joey's enthusiasm for making sure Aunt Lois stays safe. Apparently her status as Superman's #1 Frequent Flier is even obvious to the tots in Metropolis. I'm glad it made you laugh!
Cool story! Do another one! Even better (assuming that's possible)!
I have little plot bunnies nipping at my heels and a big (for me) multi-chapter one that I'm struggling to finish. I don't know about better, but I'll try not to do any worse
