Never get between Lois and her chocolate bars! Amazing how you were able to so quickly establish and hold the tension in your story before the comic conclusion. I really felt Clark's nerves nearing the breaking point. Great writing!
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.
Never get between Lois and her chocolate bars! Amazing how you were able to so quickly establish and hold the tension in your story before the comic conclusion. I really felt Clark's nerves nearing the breaking point. Great writing! 
