This is good, and I'm really interested, but it's a choppy read with such short parts being posted so far apart. It's hard for me to get really invested in the story; which is a real shame, because it's a totally worthy story. Please don't think that my waiting to read it from the archive means I am not interested; I am *very* interested; enough so that I want to read it right. You are doing a good job. I look forward to reading the rest.
