Hi JellyS2,

Seconding what others have said- it sounds like you need a beta. It also sounds like you need someone to bounce ideas off, in which case I recommend the Hangouts chat. The ladies there are always willing to help with ideas. You can find it here.

Also, you mentioned making progress but out of order. My advice is: progress is progress. Don’t worry about whether it happens in a linear fashion or not. Write what you’ve got the inspiration for. I don’t think I’ve ever written a multiple chapter story in order.

Hope this helps!

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