Oooh, I didn't even realize chapters 5 and 6 were in the same thread haha. Double comments!

I love CJ and Christy's conversation. I like that he is fighting to get her to see the good side in the hero thing, but that last little bit where he chucks his shirt and bolts after the sunlight and Christy is shocked had me rotflol Great job!

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