Hello Folc4,
What a great story! I'm enjoying it tremendously.
Reading still in progress, but I'm dropping by for a minute to write a few words.
Chapter 1: Yeah!! ADULTS! At long last!
Chapter 2 :
...as the DEA Agent stood to his feet, attempting to brush the mayonnaise and cheese off his face...
Thank you, thank you, thank your for that image. It's burned in my brain!
Back to reading! More later.
